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-We had a chat with the Kuroses and Takeshi kindly gave some practical advice on where to stat in our journey to our own brewery. He said there are briefly two aspects to consider when starting a business: procedural and strategical.  
+We had a chat with the Kuroses and Takeshi kindly gave some practical advice on where to start in our journey to our own brewery. He said there are briefly two aspects to consider when starting a business: procedural and strategical.  
 
 1. Procedural aspect
 
 - Check out the village office (村役場) to see what kind of support they can provide e.g. grants.
 - Check out the local chamber of commerce (商工会議所). They often hold seminars for members and give practical advice on how to write a business plan.
-- If you will need financial supports, consider Japan Finance Cooperation (日本政策金融公庫) and Shinkin Bank (信用金庫) offer lower interest rates for startups than local banks.
+- If you will need financial supports, consider Japan Finance Cooperation (日本政策金融公庫) and Shinkin Bank (信用金庫) who offer lower interest rates for startups than local banks.
 
 2. Strategical aspect